решебник.рф ГДЗ по английскому языку 10 класс упражнение - 7 р. 56 а
- a) Read Andrea’s letter of application for the position advertised in Ex. 6a on p. 55. Is it appropriate? Why (not)? Give reasons.
28 Leahurst Rd
York YK13 SNL
4th September
Dear Mr Willis,
I am writing to apply for the position of Part-Time Sales Assistant which I saw in the newspaper I bought while I was walking my dog, Pedro, yesterday.
I am 16 years old, I am tall and I have got long brown curly hair. I have got one sister, who I get on with very well.
Although I don’t have any experience of working in a shop, I want to work for you. I have had a regular baby-sitting job for a year now. I am trustworthy and reliable, but I can sometimes be a little impatient and moody.
I’m free to start work from July. I finish my exams at the end of May but I’m planning to go on holiday in June. I can’t wait to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Andrea Leary
- Too informal and irrelevant details
Mentioning buying the newspaper while walking her dog and details about her sister are unnecessary and unprofessional.
- Focus on appearance
Saying she is tall and has long curly hair is irrelevant for the job position.
- Negative self-description
Mentioning that she can be impatient and moody is inappropriate in a job application.
- Unclear availability
Saying she can start in July but will be on holiday in June is confusing and could be better explained.
- Informal language and short forms
I’m, got, can’t wait